Monday, March 31, 2008

Cat


There was a cat today,
lying across the road...
there was a dead cat today,
who had left this mortal abode!


There was a cat today,
run over by a car,
none to look,none to care;
as it lay dead on the busy throughfare.


Someone had to reach office early today,
Someone was getting late on their way,
Someone had spent an extra hour in bed,
And that was why the cat lay dead...


People looked back at it in disgust,
blood splashed all over the clean roadway,
"Darn cat!Has ruined our roads",
was all that we could say!


"Thank God it wasn't a man!",they said,
As if they'd care if it were,
As if it would matter to anyone,
If a man lay dead there!


But thank god there wasn't a rally,
Or a protest march with beautiful candles lit,
Or a big T.V crew who had better things to do,
The dead cat got what was deemed fit!


"THANK GOD" cuz the cat didn't cause a jam,
Thank cuz you could drive over it just fine,
"THANK GOD" the man in the car wan't late for work,
"THANK GOD" he didn't lose a minute of his time!


And the dead cat just lay there,
Befouling our great city's roadway,
Before the moping trucks came
And washed the blood away the next day....


The road gleamed just as brightly as before-
And the cars raced back and forth through night and day,
And all of us waited with bated breath...
We waited for our next prey!

36 comments:

Dhrubo said...

Tried something different....

Butterfly said...

I'm glad you tried something different. Those rock music people were attacking you!

Anyway, this is really painful. We don't think this much at all. Dead animals on the road only irritate us. But, you had the feelings to write this poem. I'm sure nobody has ever thought in this way about this subject. Hats off to you!:-)

Dhrubo said...

Thank you Sinjini,
Yes,those rock fan(atic)s were killing me!Thank you for the compliment...How was your exam?

Anonymous said...

Of course, it's so simple, I see it now!

I think I'll look for some roadkill on the streets tomorrow and draw inspiration to circle jerk poetry on my blog as well!

My, them comments will FLOW!


-Darius

*ASTER* said...

Nice poem dhrubo.Its a sad plight for animals on roads,as cows,stray dogs are just left wandering.Such accidents thus become inevitable.

The unspoken Verses said...

Its very weird but despit u thought that we woulld find u boring( as u sya in ur about me )
i found you more than interesting.. u know...

a very good attempt indeed

Titash said...

Spooky theme and spookier poem!

Loved the verses though!

Dhrubo said...

Darius,
Draw inspiration from anything you want!Who is stopping you..?
Circle jerk poetry...????

Dhrubo said...

Thank you Aster...you are right!

Oh and Scream...thank you too!I am glad that you didn't find it boring!

Dhrubo said...

Titash,
why spooky?i am happy that you liked the verses though!

Oh and Darius..it isn't just roadkill,its a real living organism!

Halcyon said...

ah.

this reminds me of many accidents.

Anonymous said...

You're right, and the first thing I'm going to do is take a photograph of the first Google image search for a dead cat, and intellectually masturbate on it.

Oh wait, that's been done already...damn.


-Darius

Anonymous said...

road kill
–noun
Informal. the body of an animal killed on a road by a motor vehicle.


And just so I don't disappoint your surprise or opinion at my language skills,

Fag.


-Darius

Dhrubo said...

Darius,
any particular problem with the poem?

Dhrubo said...

Or is the problem with me?You just seem so hostile!

Anonymous said...

You will probably find me and everything that I have to say,terribly boring.But,I can't help you there.

This blog,and everything that is in it,is a tiny window into my life.I may warn you that it can be terribly monotonous at times.But i find it fascinating!
I have always thought i was different.Different,not as in Einstein,but in a more abstract way.i never could understand things that my friends took for granted...

Why inflict all this pain upon you by starting this blog?Well,because I am tired of feeling lonely and desolate.I am tired of thinking and living and acting and writing all by myself.To be honest,this is not about all of you,this is about me.I do not want you to like it,its enough that I have it out of my system.

I try terribly hard for people to like me and not to offend them.So i am incorrigbly formal and pedantic at times.Forgive the offence.
And thank you for all the pain you've taken to read this.Go on then,sample the blog...I can assure some more!


- Darius

Butterfly said...

My exam was fine but a bit disturbing, as you now know.

Dhrubo said...

Dear Darius,
Please be more lucid in what you wish to say...pardon the stupidity,but I couldn't understand you!

Dhrubo said...

And Sinjini,
I am glad you came through!

Anonymous said...

I'm all out of pardons for this level of stupidity...


PLZ DONT CONTINUE IF YOU ARE A SHOW-OFF OR A SNOB!!!! i dont believe that life is to be wasted thinking abt what happens when we die-or run after hefty salaries,i would be quite content to have my choiciest food and lay back to enjoy life.i dont like ostentious clothing, those half ragged jeans with chains on them,the dazzling T-shirts that people wear,on which things like I AM THE COOLEST,ANIMAL MAGNETISM are written.it just screams out to me "PLEASE GIVE ME SOME ATTENTION,I AM DESPERATE FOR IT!!!!" However it doesnt mean that i dont like people who wear it,as long that they have a golden heart and dont try to be dudes and chicks in my presence!!!! well i am definitely not a part of any cool brigade not am i a psycho who will think twice before deciding not to talk to a girl. i am just an average normal person and i don't love cricket.i sometimes find it difficult to make new acqaintance. i do not consider myself gifted yet i will say that i am different from my immediate friends.



-Darius

Brainfreeze Blues said...

this here is a good writer

Dhrubo said...

Please Darius,
I don't need your "pardon"!

Dhrubo said...

Oh and Rudrani,
did you mean me?

Anonymous said...

THEN WHY ASK ME FOR IT, NUMB NUTS!


-Darius

Dhrubo said...

I never asked for your pardon!I asked what your problem with me was...But maybe all that swearing has swept off reason from your head!

Anonymous said...

*pardon the stupidity, but I couldn't understand you!*


So you're not just a fag, you're an amnesiac one.

Paul Bernard Baker said...

Yummy poem! Thanks for kind comments on my blog.
Did you read the one where the cat gets knifed?

woods said...

this poem lacks d aesthetic values of wat we know as poetry.
bt a nice thut, did u realli see dead cat, because its a rare site on the roads, we all seem to stop becoz of our old superstition wen a cat crosses a road.

Dhrubo said...

Thank you Paul...No I haven't still but I plan to do so soon!
And Dibba,I really did see a dead cat..and its not as uncommon as you might think!

bha said...

it's a good and (despite previous comments) I'd say a poetic-enough poem for the subject...the matter-of-fact-ness of it suits.

Sort of an ode to roadkill.

Deepali said...

No one treats animals like they would treat a human being. It's tragic but it's how things will be.

Butterfly said...

Shubha Nababarsha....:-)

Scribbles! said...

Hey where are u... holidaying!?

Butterfly said...

Why are you not updating?

Butterfly said...

You seem to have disappeared completely! Post something please!

Anonymous said...

Thnks for the criticism bro..


And I think thos poem is nice..but could be much more compact... gud job...


by the way...I wanna add u up in ma orkut pro ..if u want


CHARBAK